Jake Eliott

A ray of sunshine on my cheek, 
A piece of rainbow in my hands,
There’s many things I want to live
I want to write, to sing, to dance…

With all those colours that I see
I’ll paint one day the joy of feeling.
A whole new world waiting for me
Gives me a strong desire for living.

The sun rises above the mountain,
The stars with moon shine all along, 
The miracles that are surrounding 
Inspire me and make me strong. 

Enjoy the moment, laugh and love,
Life is too short to set the limits.
Believe in miracles from up above
And feel the bliss for every minute.

©Jake Eliott

ID of the Premium author: PAE4729153

Winner of the II degree of the World Literary Competition «Secret of the poetic soul», Paris 2019.

Main jury mark: 16/20

Readers’ rating: 4.9/5 (more than 700 votes in the ranking)

Total: 20.9/25

30 комментария

Larysa · 25.02.2019 в 5:24 дп

Brilliant! Simple et clear ! Bon courage!

Chloe · 15.03.2019 в 10:50 пп

I love it so much!

Gabriel Sanchez · 16.03.2019 в 10:52 пп

So positive! I like it

Marta · 18.03.2019 в 9:47 пп


Mary · 18.03.2019 в 9:50 пп

Jake, you are so talented! I wish you luck! Love, Mary…

John · 18.03.2019 в 10:07 пп

Very good

Emma · 24.03.2019 в 7:18 пп

Magnifique, mon cher Jake ! Bisous, Emma

Morgane · 24.03.2019 в 7:19 пп

One of the most inspiring poems I’ve ever read… Thank you, Jake

Emily · 24.03.2019 в 7:23 пп

Wow, I don’t know what to say, you litteraly just brought a little ray of sunshine in the evening

Anne · 24.03.2019 в 7:24 пп

Very inspiring!!!!!

Isa · 24.03.2019 в 7:25 пп

Thanks for invitation. I voted for you and wish you all the best

Amalia · 24.03.2019 в 7:27 пп

I really liked it, thank you so much

Eric · 24.03.2019 в 7:28 пп

Bravo, mes félicitations

Clara · 25.03.2019 в 7:25 пп

Good job!

Гульзара Кусаинова · 26.03.2019 в 7:06 пп

Very good, Jake! Thank you

Jake Eliott · 21.04.2019 в 1:50 пп

Thank you!

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