Jake Eliott

I guess love should be something silent
For there’s no word that can explain
Those feelings when I see you smiling,
The way you, like a sun, light up my day.

You are a song stuck in my head forever,
And when you kiss me all I want is swoon
I know that we are meant to be together
When we are dancing under the moon.

You are that yellow I’m in love with
Though I don’t know the reasons why I fell
But suddenly around you, I can’t breathe
When did I fall for you? Can’t even tell.

I’ll give my love to you with my whole heart
Because I saw the galaxies into your eyes
Because everything in you is a fine art
Because you make me fly into the skies.

©Jake Eliott

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Jake Eliott

ID of the Premium author: PAE4729153

18 Comments

Светлана Камишна-Терещенко · 19.04.2019 at 10:48 pm

Sensitive and subtle poetry. Thanks.

Chloe · 20.04.2019 at 11:57 pm

Very good, Jake!

Emily · 20.04.2019 at 11:59 pm

You should really love to write like this, thank you

Morgane · 21.04.2019 at 12:08 am

Jake, this poem is so sweet, thank you so much!

Gabriel Sanchez · 21.04.2019 at 1:53 pm

Jake, you are very talented, I am honoured to be a friend of yours, mate

Алексей Петруня · 22.04.2019 at 11:30 am

Very well/ Nice)Perfectly! Sumptuously! Wonderful! Good luck and success!

Владимир Мехонцев · 22.04.2019 at 1:52 pm

It’s really very good! Thank you so much, Jake!

Гульзара Кусаинова · 22.04.2019 at 5:57 pm

Very good, Jake!Thanks!!!

Clara · 23.04.2019 at 11:47 am

Good luck, Jake!

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