I guess love should be something silent
For there’s no word that can explain
Those feelings when I see you smiling,
The way you, like a sun, light up my day.
You are a song stuck in my head forever,
And when you kiss me all I want is swoon
I know that we are meant to be together
When we are dancing under the moon.
You are that yellow I’m in love with
Though I don’t know the reasons why I fell
But suddenly around you, I can’t breathe
When did I fall for you? Can’t even tell.
I’ll give my love to you with my whole heart
Because I saw the galaxies into your eyes
Because everything in you is a fine art
Because you make me fly into the skies.
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(124 оценок, среднее: 4.36 из 5)
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18 Comments
Светлана Камишна-Терещенко · 19.04.2019 at 10:48 pm
Sensitive and subtle poetry. Thanks.
Jake Eliott · 21.04.2019 at 1:45 pm
Thank you very much!
Chloe · 20.04.2019 at 11:57 pm
Very good, Jake!
Jake Eliott · 21.04.2019 at 1:46 pm
Chloe, thank you
Emily · 20.04.2019 at 11:59 pm
You should really love to write like this, thank you
Jake Eliott · 21.04.2019 at 1:47 pm
Thank you, dear Emily
Morgane · 21.04.2019 at 12:08 am
Jake, this poem is so sweet, thank you so much!
Jake Eliott · 21.04.2019 at 1:47 pm
Morgane, thank you
Gabriel Sanchez · 21.04.2019 at 1:53 pm
Jake, you are very talented, I am honoured to be a friend of yours, mate
Jake Eliott · 23.04.2019 at 11:43 am
Thank you, mate
Алексей Петруня · 22.04.2019 at 11:30 am
Very well/ Nice)Perfectly! Sumptuously! Wonderful! Good luck and success!
Jake Eliott · 23.04.2019 at 11:44 am
Thank you very much!
Владимир Мехонцев · 22.04.2019 at 1:52 pm
It’s really very good! Thank you so much, Jake!
Jake Eliott · 23.04.2019 at 11:44 am
Thanks for your support!
Гульзара Кусаинова · 22.04.2019 at 5:57 pm
Very good, Jake!Thanks!!!
Jake Eliott · 23.04.2019 at 11:45 am
Thank you very much!
Clara · 23.04.2019 at 11:47 am
Good luck, Jake!
Jake Eliott · 28.04.2019 at 6:48 pm
Clara, thank you very much!