Jake Eliott

A ray of sunshine on my cheek, 
A piece of rainbow in my hands,
There’s many things I want to live
I want to write, to sing, to dance…

With all those colours that I see
I’ll paint one day the joy of feeling.
A whole new world waiting for me
Gives me a strong desire for living.

The sun rises above the mountain,
The stars with moon shine all along, 
The miracles that are surrounding 
Inspire me and make me strong. 

Enjoy the moment, laugh and love,
Life is too short to set the limits.
Believe in miracles from up above
And feel the bliss for every minute.

©Jake Eliott

ID of the Premium author: PAE4729153

Winner of the II degree of the World Literary Competition «Secret of the poetic soul», Paris 2019.

Main jury mark: 16/20

Readers’ rating: 4.9/5 (more than 700 votes in the ranking)

Total: 20.9/25


Jake Eliott

ID of the Premium author: PAE4729153

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Larysa
Larysa
Гость
1 год назад

Brilliant! Simple et clear ! Bon courage!

Chloe
Chloe
Гость
1 год назад

I love it so much!

Gabriel Sanchez
Gabriel Sanchez
Гость
1 год назад

So positive! I like it

Marta
Marta
Гость
1 год назад

Divine

Mary
Mary
Гость
1 год назад

Jake, you are so talented! I wish you luck! Love, Mary…

John
John
Гость
1 год назад

Very good

Emma
Emma
Гость
1 год назад

Magnifique, mon cher Jake ! Bisous, Emma

Morgane
Morgane
Гость
1 год назад

One of the most inspiring poems I’ve ever read… Thank you, Jake

Emily
Emily
Гость
1 год назад

Wow, I don’t know what to say, you litteraly just brought a little ray of sunshine in the evening

Anne
Anne
Гость
1 год назад

Very inspiring!!!!!

Isa
Isa
Гость
1 год назад

Thanks for invitation. I voted for you and wish you all the best

Amalia
Amalia
Гость
1 год назад

I really liked it, thank you so much

Eric
Eric
Гость
1 год назад

Bravo, mes félicitations

Clara
Clara
Гость
1 год назад

Good job!

Гульзара Кусаинова
Гульзара Кусаинова
Гость
1 год назад

Very good, Jake! Thank you

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